Oh sleep, tortured virgin mother
As stars seek your anxious womb
For every child born
Surely is the brightest ever
Never let her fire fade
or
Bump bump bump
Baby bumper ride.
Express to the bump!
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Microfiction Mondays feature the shortest stories in tweetable 140 characters, or even fewer. Hosted weekly by Susan - it's a writers' playground!
I like the first - beautiful and breathless in anticipation!
ReplyDeleteI like the first one, too! Lovely MM! Hope you have a great week!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
I love the first one but the second one sure made me lol.
ReplyDeleteGread job!
Definitely the first! Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteThe first is beautiful (and vaguely religious). But the second is just funny. Wonderful.
ReplyDeletePositive verse. I've gone for science for today's 140
ReplyDeleteI think I like your first one best, although both are good. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI like the first one best--beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI love the first one...so wonderful!
ReplyDeleteI like the first one as well. It is beautiful
ReplyDelete:-)
first one...quite beautiful
ReplyDeleteWonderful! The first is beautiful and the second is fun.
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