Take your pick : Virgin Mother or Baby Bumper Ride




Oh sleep, tortured virgin mother
As stars seek your anxious womb
For every child born
Surely is the brightest ever

Never let her fire fade

or

Bump bump bump
Baby bumper ride.
Express to the bump!


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Microfiction Mondays feature the shortest stories in tweetable 140 characters, or even fewer. Hosted weekly by Susan - it's a writers' playground!

12 comments:

  1. I like the first - beautiful and breathless in anticipation!

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  2. I like the first one, too! Lovely MM! Hope you have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  3. I love the first one but the second one sure made me lol.
    Gread job!

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  4. Definitely the first! Beautifully written.

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  5. The first is beautiful (and vaguely religious). But the second is just funny. Wonderful.

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  6. Positive verse. I've gone for science for today's 140

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  7. I think I like your first one best, although both are good. Thanks for sharing.

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  8. I like the first one best--beautiful!

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  9. I love the first one...so wonderful!

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  10. I like the first one as well. It is beautiful
    :-)

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  11. first one...quite beautiful

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  12. Wonderful! The first is beautiful and the second is fun.

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