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lover of the night
folding poems 
in a blanket of stars

daughters of the sun
drinking legends
for breakfast and tea

mother earth
milking passion
dreams on the milky way

passion legends poems
daughters mother lover 

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words by ninotaziz
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17 comments:

  1. I love the second stanza.

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  2. Love each line & really so like you Ninot ~ Thanks for joining us ~

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  3. This is absolutely wonderful :D

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  4. Such energy, such hope--I really dig your first stanza; love the notion of /folding poems/ like folding the edges of deep space to plunge through a black hole to expedite our journey.

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  5. Each stanza a perfect poem in and of itself. The connections of the women in and all through it. Lovely poem.

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  6. I too love your second stanza - great take on the prompt :)

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  7. folding poems in blankets of stars - that is cool - love the dreaminess...and what a cool breakfast as well... i love how full the world is with words...

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  8. Love the drinking of legends...a mellow, dream-like quality to this. I love the night, too.

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  9. To dream in LUCID
    WAKING SINGING
    poems is to DREAM ALIVE
    never drinking death..
    to dance this way
    in moves of free..
    make life an
    ART of living now..:)

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  10. Like a rich banquet for the senses. So beautiful.

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  11. Oh, I like each one of these - perhaps the first one most, but it's hard to choose. And what wonderful words - passion, legends, poems certainly describe you perfectly!

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  12. Ninot Ma'am, beautiful shot in that unique poetic language which goes smoothly in any direction. Selamat Hari Raya Aidul Fitri!

    Hank

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  13. This is just gorgeous Ninot. I think my favorite is that first stanza but the rest are all close seconds.

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  14. stirring poem - very nice - legends feed the hero within don't they

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  15. 'folding poems in a blanket of stars' lovely! Thanks for sharing.

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  16. These are all lovely, but my favorite is the image of folding poems in a blanket of stars....such a warm, exquisite and romantic image.

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