I just sit upon a writing desk, and write. And then, I tell stories. Legends of long ago.
yow- so many of us saw desolation in this room. Well done.
Your first para is beautiful... I felt easy singing that.:)
WOW! So much pain can only be beautiful. :)
So true - except for RA [lucky you], everyone was affected by the grey,colourless world.And I really thought at first I should have left out the first para - now I am glad I didn't! Thank you for dropping by!
I like it... sad and powerful
Such a painful, yet beautiful poem. You have captured the experience of pain and loss of hope in this poem. Beautiful writing...it would also make an awesome song. :-)
I feel for Sara ... sadness surrounds her today! Nice writing!
I agree, powerful but extremely sad. Well done.
nice piece, but I hope she did not die...that would be too sad..bkm
That's some good progressive verse, well done :)
Creative look at the prompt. Sad but strong post!
Such sadness and pain captured in simply beautiful verse. I could never say so much with so little. Wonderfully done.
Interesting that the word verification was "lyrical"
Dear Gabi, Carrie, Helen, Connie & T&LDon't we all love sad stories? Though I can't see it as a song, Carrie.Sara has become my Ambassador of anguish. Great to see you here again.
Dear bkm, thanks! There are many forms of death.
Arian, really love your work. Love seeing you here.
Dear Tumblewords,Thank you!
Dear Eric,Some of us write prose, and some write poetry. I love both but find both difficult and have to work at it.Thank you!
So sad and painful I felt the pain.These were my favourite lines....'The sunlighthung in the roomLeft to doom.' Very powerfulChristine
Thanks Christine for dropping by. Loved you magpie too!
Dark and delicious.
Conveys the pain so well.. wonderful poem ninotaziz
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