Symmetrical



Parallel angles
Breathe in tandem
Heartbeats racing

Escaping sigh mingle
Adrenaline rush
Moment in time

Right here waiting
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Written for the PPP challenge over at One Stop Poetry

11 comments:

  1. Beautiful, as always - and soooo romantic! You restore my faith!(Too bad it's too late and I'm so old, hee hee!Long in the tooth, as they used to say :))

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  2. Very well said... A lover's symmetry. The last line of the 1st stanza seems to rhyme with the last line of the poem the way I read it. Great flow.

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  3. the poem itself felt like a snapshot -- "moment in time" great read!

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  4. what a sensual one here.. :)

    Very well crafted..!!
    keep Writing My Dear.. :)

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  5. Greetings!
    How is everything?
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  6. Beautiful symmetry, flow of emotion continues.

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  7. Who needs any more words... - so emotive and precise

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  8. You are a true romantic Ninotaziz...this is beautiful! :-)

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