I just sit upon a writing desk, and write. And then, I tell stories. Legends of long ago.
Beautiful, as always - and soooo romantic! You restore my faith!(Too bad it's too late and I'm so old, hee hee!Long in the tooth, as they used to say :))
Very well said... A lover's symmetry. The last line of the 1st stanza seems to rhyme with the last line of the poem the way I read it. Great flow.
the poem itself felt like a snapshot -- "moment in time" great read!
what a sensual one here.. :)Very well crafted..!!keep Writing My Dear.. :)
Beautiful symmetry, flow of emotion continues.
Who needs any more words... - so emotive and precise
mind blowing piece.well done.
Beautiful writing, ninotaziz. :-)
You are a true romantic Ninotaziz...this is beautiful! :-)
Share with me your thoughts - and friendship !
Beautiful, as always - and soooo romantic! You restore my faith!(Too bad it's too late and I'm so old, hee hee!Long in the tooth, as they used to say :))
ReplyDeleteVery well said... A lover's symmetry. The last line of the 1st stanza seems to rhyme with the last line of the poem the way I read it. Great flow.
ReplyDeletethe poem itself felt like a snapshot -- "moment in time" great read!
ReplyDeletewhat a sensual one here.. :)
ReplyDeleteVery well crafted..!!
keep Writing My Dear.. :)
Beautiful symmetry, flow of emotion continues.
ReplyDeleteWho needs any more words... - so emotive and precise
ReplyDeletemind blowing piece.
ReplyDeletewell done.
Beautiful writing, ninotaziz. :-)
ReplyDeleteYou are a true romantic Ninotaziz...this is beautiful! :-)
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