The downfall of Malacca

Unending summer
Long ago admirals marched
Endless siege

The only way
To conquer the city gates
The bridge must fall

Warriors divide
20,000 fell, more came
From the river

The drawbridge
Held the key to glory
To downfall

Malacca 
Waterways so conquered
was no more

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18 comments:

  1. The Malacca Sultanate was conquered by the Portuguese Armada in 1511 after endless siege. The river, and control of the drawbridge that controlled the waterways of the Malacca River was key to the conquest.

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  2. I do not know much about haiku.. but I think, as always, your post is awesome!

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    1. Thank you Ayoh Wang...I have Melaka on my mind.

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    1. Thank you. Actually I love people who can write so much in 3 lines for a power impact haiku. But that is difficult for me!

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  4. Wonderful set.. I loved the second one the most..

    Someone is Special

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    1. Hi SiS, I haven't seen you in a while. Great to see you here. Thank you.

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    1. You can do the three line haiku! I envy you! Thank you for visiting...

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  6. those darn Portuguese (my husband is one!) a wonderfully worded bit of history I googled Malacca and learned something new and interesting today....

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    1. It was so long ago. I now have many close friends of Portuguese descent!

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  7. This is great. Haiku, story, and history lesson combined.

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  8. Nicely written Nino. A strong image of a battle ... very suprisingly used in a haiku.

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    1. Kristjaan dear,
      You are right. Perhaps battle scenes are not suitable for haiku...

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  9. Ninot Ma'am,
    The Malacca River obviously had seen better days very unlike what it is now! A wonderful peek back into history. Great haiku set!

    Hank

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    1. Thank you Sir Hank! I think the ship moored on Sg Melaka is the wrong ship!

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  10. A tragic story in history told by a great story teller.....It is always important to remember all of history so that we can learn from it and not make the same mistakes....thank you for sharing this Ninot. Hope all is well with you these days. :-)

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  11. It was such a tragic day in the history of Melaka. The bridge was so important in the battle because it linked the two parts of the city divided by Melaka river. Loosing the bridge split Melaka's army into two. The warriors of Melaka fought hard in the pitched battle.

    What a great way of reminding us about this important day.

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