Revelation

 
 
Melancholy falls
with autumn leaves, golden brown
come revelation
 
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Written for Haiku Heights

8 comments:

  1. revelation that winter's around the corner? that sort of revelation I could do without right now....can't let summer go!

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  2. Revelation of the end of a summer fling more likely!

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  3. Revelation of new beginnings. Fall always seems like a start to me, probably because that's when school begins again in the US,

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  4. smiles....glad that revelation breaks the melancholy...

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  5. The falling melancholy is a lovely image that makes this haiku.

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  6. Ninot Ma'am,
    Much hidden behind the color brown, wonder what was revealed? Nicely!

    Hank

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  7. Hello, Ninot, your haiku has a melancholic lost love metaphor with such heartfelt and tender emotion. Nicely weaved in with nature images. Thank you for your sweet comments on my blog and for listing it on your blog roll. I'm honored. :)

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