Magpie Tales # 39
The seasoned warrior
of the day keeps alert
But cobwebs distort
his short sighted vision
Awk! The warrior falls...
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Written for Magpie Tales - which I miss tremendously.
The seasoned warrior
of the day keeps alert
But cobwebs distort
his short sighted vision
Awk! The warrior falls...
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Written for Magpie Tales - which I miss tremendously.
How many of us get distracted by those 'cobwebs?' Nicely written!
ReplyDeleteThank you Helen. I am so glad you noticed this was an analogy for all of us!
ReplyDeleteDear Ninotaziz Ma'am,
ReplyDeleteThe cobwebs can feature as something important here and many may just give it scant notice. Great!
A wonderful analogy Ninotaziz....you have a brilliant heart. Hope you are doing well....you have been in my thougts much lately. :-)
ReplyDeleteDear Sir Hank (Kaykuala) and Carrie,
ReplyDeleteThank you. I know I can always count on the two of you to cheer me on!
oh the warrior
ReplyDeleteat least you saw him as one
missed you too
love the "awk"
ReplyDeletebrilliant!!!
ReplyDelete:)
Cobwebs have a way of doing that.
ReplyDeleteat least he is seasoned :)
ReplyDeletethat is right....one must keep those cobwebs in check or the battle is over....bkm
ReplyDeletespiders which live inside the house do not make beautiful webs, they just look dirty. yes, more than enough to distract us.
ReplyDeleteI love the line Awk The Warrior Falls too funny!
ReplyDeleteLove it! great write.
ReplyDeleteVictim of an unexpected web.
ReplyDeleteGreat - the warrior is a good name...
ReplyDeleteLove it! Especially the "Auk!" I can relate to that feathered creature!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful
ReplyDeleteawk! smiles. yeah the warrior needs keener eyes than that...
ReplyDeleteAnother hero in his own mind!! Thanks for this treat!
ReplyDeleteThank you all for loving the vwarrior!
ReplyDeletepowerful.
ReplyDeleteNeato, Nino!
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