The Warrior


Magpie Tales # 39

The seasoned warrior
of the day keeps alert
But cobwebs distort
his short sighted vision

Awk! The warrior falls...

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Written for Magpie Tales - which I miss tremendously.

24 comments:

  1. How many of us get distracted by those 'cobwebs?' Nicely written!

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  2. Thank you Helen. I am so glad you noticed this was an analogy for all of us!

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  3. Dear Ninotaziz Ma'am,
    The cobwebs can feature as something important here and many may just give it scant notice. Great!

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  4. A wonderful analogy Ninotaziz....you have a brilliant heart. Hope you are doing well....you have been in my thougts much lately. :-)

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  5. Dear Sir Hank (Kaykuala) and Carrie,
    Thank you. I know I can always count on the two of you to cheer me on!

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  6. oh the warrior
    at least you saw him as one
    missed you too

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  7. Cobwebs have a way of doing that.

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  8. that is right....one must keep those cobwebs in check or the battle is over....bkm

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  9. spiders which live inside the house do not make beautiful webs, they just look dirty. yes, more than enough to distract us.

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  10. I love the line Awk The Warrior Falls too funny!

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  11. Great - the warrior is a good name...

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  12. Love it! Especially the "Auk!" I can relate to that feathered creature!

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  13. awk! smiles. yeah the warrior needs keener eyes than that...

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  14. Another hero in his own mind!! Thanks for this treat!

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  15. Thank you all for loving the vwarrior!

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