The Mirror


Tousled existance
What is real
Mirrored moments

Rapturous embrace
Whispered sigh
Erotic escape

Trembling quiver
Of the lips
Too sweet to remember

The lover who just left...

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25 comments:

  1. DeborahOctober 20, 2010 at 1:17 AM

    A moment so well captured, well done!

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  2. JinksyOctober 20, 2010 at 3:19 AM

    Love and loss are often bedfellows...

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  3. RiverOctober 20, 2010 at 6:00 AM

    Oh the sadness and pain of the loss of love. Great job at prompting off the picture. :)

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  4. chiccorealOctober 20, 2010 at 6:05 AM

    Dear Nino: Feast of the smorgasborg kind. Sensual imagery. Love "trembling quiver"!

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  5. Tess KincaidOctober 20, 2010 at 6:40 AM

    Gorgeous!!

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  6. kathi harrisOctober 20, 2010 at 12:12 PM

    Very sensuous. Nice!

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  7. Carrie Van HornOctober 20, 2010 at 12:46 PM

    Ninotaziz this is breathtaking....i love it!!
    :-)

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  8. Business IQOctober 20, 2010 at 1:20 PM

    Beautiful example of how to capture one, breathless, meaningful moment.

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  9. MartinOctober 20, 2010 at 1:41 PM

    "..Trembling quiver
    Of the lips
    Too sweet to remember.." Ecstasy, indeed!

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  10. ReflectionsOctober 20, 2010 at 2:14 PM

    Well captured romanticism. Nice magpie.

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  11. *October 20, 2010 at 3:46 PM

    Ah, the sweet bite of love left. Love your word choice, how it captures that feeling.

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  12. UnknownOctober 20, 2010 at 5:39 PM

    very nice...sweet mystery of love

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  13. MaryOctober 20, 2010 at 8:47 PM

    Your poem gives much to think about. What IS real? And is the mirror really accurate? Well composed.

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  14. Kathe W.October 21, 2010 at 8:37 AM

    very sexy!

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  15. Sherry Blue SkyOctober 21, 2010 at 9:16 AM

    Awesome response to the prompt - wow! You captured the emotions so breathtakingly, all quiver and tremors. Well done!

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  16. SusannahOctober 21, 2010 at 11:41 AM

    I really like this and love the first line! Wonderful Magpie!

    My Magpie

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  17. AnonymousOctober 22, 2010 at 6:59 AM

    This is sublime from beginning to end. Love and Light, Sender

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  18. AnonymousOctober 22, 2010 at 10:18 AM

    I like the subtle question here

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  19. Sue JOctober 22, 2010 at 8:06 PM

    Great Magpie.

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  20. Brian MillerOctober 23, 2010 at 3:54 AM

    oh man you got me all worked up just to be gone already...smiles.

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  21. ClaudiaOctober 23, 2010 at 10:42 AM

    loves sweet embrace..nice capture of a private moment..and i hope he's coming back.

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  22. signed...bkmOctober 23, 2010 at 7:32 PM

    Lovely and intimate write of moments to remember...bkm

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  23. ninotazizOctober 24, 2010 at 12:35 AM

    Bkm, I loved the opportunity to get to know you better over at Jingle's! Tracy did a marvelous job on your interview.

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  24. Vinay Leo R.October 24, 2010 at 9:28 AM

    very sensuous :) very nice moment nicely captured :D

    My Magpie is Here

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  25. AnonymousOctober 24, 2010 at 7:40 PM

    mmm, there is nothing so lovely,fleeting passion caught in a web set free rainy curtain

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