The Mirror


Tousled existance
What is real
Mirrored moments

Rapturous embrace
Whispered sigh
Erotic escape

Trembling quiver
Of the lips
Too sweet to remember

The lover who just left...

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25 comments:

  1. A moment so well captured, well done!

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  2. Love and loss are often bedfellows...

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  3. Oh the sadness and pain of the loss of love. Great job at prompting off the picture. :)

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  4. Dear Nino: Feast of the smorgasborg kind. Sensual imagery. Love "trembling quiver"!

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  5. Ninotaziz this is breathtaking....i love it!!
    :-)

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  6. Beautiful example of how to capture one, breathless, meaningful moment.

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  7. "..Trembling quiver
    Of the lips
    Too sweet to remember.." Ecstasy, indeed!

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  8. Well captured romanticism. Nice magpie.

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  9. Ah, the sweet bite of love left. Love your word choice, how it captures that feeling.

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  10. Your poem gives much to think about. What IS real? And is the mirror really accurate? Well composed.

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  11. Awesome response to the prompt - wow! You captured the emotions so breathtakingly, all quiver and tremors. Well done!

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  12. I really like this and love the first line! Wonderful Magpie!

    My Magpie

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  13. This is sublime from beginning to end. Love and Light, Sender

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  14. oh man you got me all worked up just to be gone already...smiles.

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  15. loves sweet embrace..nice capture of a private moment..and i hope he's coming back.

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  16. Lovely and intimate write of moments to remember...bkm

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  17. Bkm, I loved the opportunity to get to know you better over at Jingle's! Tracy did a marvelous job on your interview.

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  18. very sensuous :) very nice moment nicely captured :D

    My Magpie is Here

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  19. mmm, there is nothing so lovely,fleeting passion caught in a web set free rainy curtain

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