Love In Transit


Sunday best after a lifetime of struggles
Love found, too late to be comfortable
Despite the promise of the moon
To lose all too soon...
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19 comments:

  1. Strong words beautifully woven Ninotaziz :)

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  2. Berjanji bulan dan bintang (promise of the moon and star)
    hilang entah kemana (nowhere to be found)..
    Somehow it sound macabre..
    rather on the darker side of the intrigue..
    too deep for me yet again!

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  3. A beautiful piece of writing, ninotaziz. :-)

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  4. Great post! Made me sad, somehow...but inspiring at the same time. I wish them all the best.
    Have a wonderful week. Cheers!

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  5. Love seems to conquer all, wonderful Poem Ninotaziz

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  6. Love lost out here for sure, Nino. :)
    Nicely written even if the ending was bad.
    ..

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  7. "Love found too late to be comfortable," what a profound line. Sad and stunning.

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  8. Aww, they could still work it out.

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  9. The first line sums it up somehow ... very good!

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  10. I've got goosebumps. . .very poignant. I hope they work it out.

    Have a lovely week x

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  11. A bittersweet story, but love never fails. I like it.

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  12. This was truly a beautiful piece of work. I love it It's a sad yet romantic story. :) Very well done :)

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  13. Beautiful like usual.
    I love visiting your blog on Mondays.

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  14. What a story, told in so few words! It's just gorgeous.

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