Sunday best after a lifetime of struggles
Love found, too late to be comfortable
Despite the promise of the moon
To lose all too soon...
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Strong words beautifully woven Ninotaziz :)
ReplyDeleteBerjanji bulan dan bintang (promise of the moon and star)
ReplyDeletehilang entah kemana (nowhere to be found)..
Somehow it sound macabre..
rather on the darker side of the intrigue..
too deep for me yet again!
A beautiful piece of writing, ninotaziz. :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat post! Made me sad, somehow...but inspiring at the same time. I wish them all the best.
ReplyDeleteHave a wonderful week. Cheers!
Love seems to conquer all, wonderful Poem Ninotaziz
ReplyDeleteLove lost out here for sure, Nino. :)
ReplyDeleteNicely written even if the ending was bad.
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"Love found too late to be comfortable," what a profound line. Sad and stunning.
ReplyDeleteAww, they could still work it out.
ReplyDeletePowerful and profound. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteThe first line sums it up somehow ... very good!
ReplyDeleteI've got goosebumps. . .very poignant. I hope they work it out.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely week x
that was simply lovely!
ReplyDeleteA bittersweet story, but love never fails. I like it.
ReplyDeleteThis was truly a beautiful piece of work. I love it It's a sad yet romantic story. :) Very well done :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully brought out. :O)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful like usual.
ReplyDeleteI love visiting your blog on Mondays.
amazing writing. keep thriving!
ReplyDeleteWonderfully done. :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a story, told in so few words! It's just gorgeous.
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