Metamorphosis


Do not struggle so, my love
It will only take a while
Then we will fly to the stars
You and I




Words by ninotaziz Copyright 2011 © ninotaziz. All rights reserved.
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Written for
Microfiction Monday - a realm where the impossible occurs
weekly, here prey and victim take flight. Find more bizarre tales
here.

20 comments:

  1. Now that I look at it again, there might be a hint of romance-good job with the poetry!

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  2. Oh my,what romantic talk I hear.
    Good one about love in the afternoon! :)
    Have a great week.

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  3. Ah, yes! Romance it is! Love comes to all -- well, in one way or another! Great one for the day!! Enjoy your week!

    Sylvia

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  4. I hope it works out for them...if the lady is struggling, perhaps she doesn't really want to go??? LOL
    Have a great week. Cheers.

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  5. oooooh it sounds sooo romantic, LOVE IT! love how you turned the picture to black and white and focused on their faces, it goes really well with your poem. Very nicely written.

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  6. WoW! Someone or something just ate my first comment! Possibly Mothman?!

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  7. Oh yes, Sylvia. The lady certainly does not want to go. But she will forget all that she was in a while...and pine for the stars.

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  8. 2nd Attempt (Wish me luck!)--> Here's what I said the first go-round:

    OoooOoooo! So...so...dramática! I love it!

    Come for a visit? Thanks!
    SparkleFarkle~~~~~*

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  9. Creepy tale! (But I loved it!)

    Have a great week.

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  10. I wonder what "will only take a little while." Maybe he's going to wrap her in a cocoon...

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  11. oh...we were on the same track with the prompt...I hope their love soars!

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  12. Oh I like the sound of this, it seems like the premise for a story. :O)

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  13. Sort of a new version of Beauty and the Beast. :)

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  14. it will only take a while...hmmm...wondering what it might be...lol

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  15. I like the way your altered the picture to fit your words!

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  16. Scary and lovely all at the same time. :O)

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  17. You are a true romantic Ninotaziz...i love this....and love your new picture. :-)

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  18. Reading here and I see a whole new angle to their love affair.... :>:>

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  19. Ninot Ma'am,
    1. Such assuring words repeated many times over in many instances.

    2. Never had the opportunity to say 'bravo - no more NYEve happenings'. You opened up on Pakcik's saying you were through with all that.

    Again a strong hint in your 'header's writing desk' that you're bent on 'writing and writing' Good for you. Go for it Ma'am! Best wishes for your new book!

    3. Now we're seeing more of the writer face to face in your new photo.

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