Metamorphosis


Do not struggle so, my love
It will only take a while
Then we will fly to the stars
You and I




Words by ninotaziz Copyright 2011 © ninotaziz. All rights reserved.
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Written for Microfiction Monday - a realm where the impossible occurs
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20 comments:

  1. Susan FobesJanuary 9, 2011 at 6:09 PM

    Now that I look at it again, there might be a hint of romance-good job with the poetry!

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  2. PeggyJanuary 9, 2011 at 6:20 PM

    Oh my,what romantic talk I hear.
    Good one about love in the afternoon! :)
    Have a great week.

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  3. Sylvia KJanuary 9, 2011 at 6:22 PM

    Ah, yes! Romance it is! Love comes to all -- well, in one way or another! Great one for the day!! Enjoy your week!

    Sylvia

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 9, 2011 at 6:48 PM

    I hope it works out for them...if the lady is struggling, perhaps she doesn't really want to go??? LOL
    Have a great week. Cheers.

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  5. Maria@BubblegumandDuctTapeJanuary 9, 2011 at 7:10 PM

    oooooh it sounds sooo romantic, LOVE IT! love how you turned the picture to black and white and focused on their faces, it goes really well with your poem. Very nicely written.

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  6. SparkleFarkelJanuary 9, 2011 at 7:14 PM

    WoW! Someone or something just ate my first comment! Possibly Mothman?!

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  7. ninotazizJanuary 9, 2011 at 7:17 PM

    Oh yes, Sylvia. The lady certainly does not want to go. But she will forget all that she was in a while...and pine for the stars.

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  8. SparkleFarkelJanuary 9, 2011 at 7:18 PM

    2nd Attempt (Wish me luck!)--> Here's what I said the first go-round:

    OoooOoooo! So...so...dramática! I love it!

    Come for a visit? Thanks!
    SparkleFarkle~~~~~*

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  9. Michael G-GJanuary 9, 2011 at 7:20 PM

    Creepy tale! (But I loved it!)

    Have a great week.

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 9, 2011 at 10:08 PM

    I wonder what "will only take a little while." Maybe he's going to wrap her in a cocoon...

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  11. UnknownJanuary 10, 2011 at 3:22 AM

    oh...we were on the same track with the prompt...I hope their love soars!

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  12. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2011 at 4:31 AM

    Oh I like the sound of this, it seems like the premise for a story. :O)

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  13. hopeJanuary 10, 2011 at 5:40 AM

    Sort of a new version of Beauty and the Beast. :)

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  14. Brian MillerJanuary 10, 2011 at 8:51 AM

    it will only take a while...hmmm...wondering what it might be...lol

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  15. TrellissimoJanuary 10, 2011 at 1:16 PM

    I like the way your altered the picture to fit your words!

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  16. DianeJanuary 10, 2011 at 2:24 PM

    Scary and lovely all at the same time. :O)

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  17. Carrie Van HornJanuary 10, 2011 at 4:21 PM

    You are a true romantic Ninotaziz...i love this....and love your new picture. :-)

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  18. KarenJanuary 10, 2011 at 9:54 PM

    Reading here and I see a whole new angle to their love affair.... :>:>

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  19. kaykualaJanuary 11, 2011 at 4:57 AM

    Ninot Ma'am,
    1. Such assuring words repeated many times over in many instances.

    2. Never had the opportunity to say 'bravo - no more NYEve happenings'. You opened up on Pakcik's saying you were through with all that.

    Again a strong hint in your 'header's writing desk' that you're bent on 'writing and writing' Good for you. Go for it Ma'am! Best wishes for your new book!

    3. Now we're seeing more of the writer face to face in your new photo.

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  20. Priyanka BhowmickJanuary 11, 2011 at 10:27 AM

    very romantic... good MFM!!

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