There is a moon
Hanging over the window tonight
And I feel it is soon
Someone will come to make it right
Trapped inside walls
Of my own doing, I hide
It has been a long fall
My tears of loneliness, long dried
The doors are unlocked
I could walk out I suppose
But what lies around the block
No one knows, no one knows
I hear the footsteps
I cringe even as they pass my door
I have been here forever
Never knowing what will come forth
There is a moon
Hanging over the window tonight
And I hope it is soon
Someone will convince me to fight
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Inspired by Tess Kincaid over at Magpietales
For oppressed women and children who can't speak for themselves
love this..sweet...great imagination!
ReplyDeleteNinot Ma'am,
ReplyDeleteThere is so much at stake and she had better be prepared. She had to maintain her sanity.No two ways about it. She had to fight! Great lines!
Hank
Oh you have captured how the oppressed hide, feeling lonely and trapped. Been there. I love the moon's appearance at beginning and end of the poem - shining some hope, I trust, showing the way.
ReplyDeleteNicely done
ReplyDeleteWhat a powerful and reflective poem with so many layers of meaning. Always good to see you in PU.
ReplyDeleteoh dear she needs to get out!
ReplyDeleteI hope the moons stays high! Nice read, very enjoyable!
ReplyDeleteI hope so, too.
ReplyDeleteHave a merry Christmas!