bE Y Ond REal
time moves along backwards
hurtling like a comet
to a world where the music is
en C H an T ing
courteous, and archaic
expressions of love are
to die for
e MO tiona L UPHeava l s
are euphoric and the look
inviting one to the other side
i s m o s t a n t i c i p a t e d
S u R R enDE r
by ninotaziz
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Hmmmm...I think someone has slipped you one of those charm potions:)
ReplyDeleteOh, that romantic world is so beautiful.....where the music is enchanting. Loved this, Ninot.
ReplyDeletethis is the nonsense that comes with love
ReplyDeleteI feel the dream of a world that has passed coming strongly through your lines... wonderfully beautiful
ReplyDeletenice... that parallel world where we get glimpses and dwell in when love finds us...
ReplyDeleteha. i like the mix of upper and lower case...adds just a bit of crazy to it....hey can i jump on that time machine backward to love...smiles.
ReplyDeleteNinot Ma'am,
ReplyDeleteLove hurtling backwards can certainly make young lovers go crazy but surprisingly enough it happens a lot. Those with strong resolves are the ones who give up but later triumphed with a different partner. Great lines!
Hank