Human Nature



 Seasons turn crimson
 Skies smell of rust, yet
The moon ignites passion.

Still.

by ninotaziz

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19 comments:

  1. ninotazizMarch 30, 2014 at 7:26 AM

    Crimson thoughts tonight.

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  2. Cressida de NovaMarch 30, 2014 at 7:32 AM

    Just beautiful!

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  3. GailMarch 30, 2014 at 7:46 AM

    Hope.

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  4. kaykualaMarch 30, 2014 at 8:04 AM

    Ninot Ma'am
    Beautiful rendition! The moon all for it!

    Hank

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  5. hyperCRYPTICalMarch 30, 2014 at 8:38 AM

    Lovely lovely lovely!
    Anna :o]

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  6. Sumana RoyMarch 30, 2014 at 9:18 AM

    beautiful... :)

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  7. Brian MillerMarch 30, 2014 at 9:33 AM

    ha. the moon always inspires passion,
    even when the world takes things to rust...

    hiya ninot
    smiles

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  8. humbirdMarch 30, 2014 at 10:22 AM

    Evocative poem..

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  9. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 30, 2014 at 12:00 PM

    "Still." How cool. Succinct and says a lot. Happy Sunday, my friend!

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  10. Stafford RayMarch 30, 2014 at 1:37 PM

    Feels a bit desperate to me, with crimson skies smelling of rust, if rust represents decay. But then again, it can simply be a warm colour and it is encouraging that the 'moon ignites passion still.'

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    1. ninotazizMarch 30, 2014 at 5:06 PM

      It is a sign of desperation, Stafford. As our world crumbles around us, we pretend under the covers of moonlight that all is fine

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  11. HelenaMarch 30, 2014 at 2:44 PM

    Rust by Moonlight....could make for a nice concerto! Very much enjoyed your verse!

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  12. Kathe W.March 30, 2014 at 5:16 PM

    Forever it will be!

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  13. dsnake1March 31, 2014 at 1:03 AM

    is it the haze or a certain airplane mystery that inspired these verses? :(

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  14. Cait O'ConnorMarch 31, 2014 at 7:39 AM

    Love it all.

    The moon ignites passion. Still.

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  15. ZQMarch 31, 2014 at 8:04 AM

    :-)
    ZQ

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  16. Belva Rae StaplesMarch 31, 2014 at 9:36 AM

    The moon should always ignite passion. I love this and the last word 'still' is the perfect ending.

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  17. moondustwriterMarch 31, 2014 at 2:35 PM

    passion beneath the moon :)

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  18. 21 WitsMarch 31, 2014 at 5:22 PM

    Skies smell of rust, that is a beautiful image.

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