Red Alert On Red


it was a tiltilating evening
for the young debutante
the chinoiserie surroundings
lulled her guarded senses

and she ended up chained in a strange room

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beware our daughters : for magpie tales
I wish human trafficking did not exist

12 comments:

  1. Beware of those strange rooms at parties. Good poem.

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  2. Wonderful take on the prompt, Ninotaziz. I love this.

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  3. Well that put an end to the party... disturbing, but excellent story in few words to the wise!

    Rick

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  4. Human trafficking is horrific ... lulled might also have been dulled. Nicely written.

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  5. Important topic, Ninot. A dangerous world out there for daughters.

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  6. i bet casa nova is the one who slayed here into that room :) that would be all right. haha

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  7. Very chillling tale perfectly executed!

    Anna :o]

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  8. Chilling indeed and such a frightening truth in it...bkm

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  9. So true and frightening that this does happen in the world....thank you for sharing this Ninotaziz!

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  10. Thanks for spotlighting this little known tragedy.

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