poemsbyninotaziz: fields of gold

fields of gold

gold specks in your eyes

reflect the autumn sunshine

the wheat in the fields

by ninotaziz

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10 comments:

kaykualaSeptember 27, 2013 at 2:41 AM
Ninot Ma'am,
Glint of gold gives the right Autumn brown. Nicely!

Hank
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Gillena CoxSeptember 27, 2013 at 3:45 AM
nicely done; have a nice Friday

much love...
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AnonymousSeptember 27, 2013 at 5:04 AM
Lovely haiku!
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Sumana RoySeptember 27, 2013 at 6:16 AM
great........
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AnonymousSeptember 27, 2013 at 7:45 AM
Ow, lovely!
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Brian MillerSeptember 27, 2013 at 9:14 AM
lovely...beautiful imagery...and cool connection to seeing that in their eyes as well...
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Sherry Blue SkySeptember 27, 2013 at 10:22 AM
Beautiful!!
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UnknownSeptember 27, 2013 at 2:56 PM
nicely
presented
golden words
in golden letters
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AnonymousSeptember 28, 2013 at 6:42 PM
Beautifully done!
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AnonymousOctober 1, 2013 at 2:16 PM
I think the last line makes this one--unexpected.
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