I just sit upon a writing desk, and write. And then, I tell stories. Legends of long ago.
The anger seems present so often in PP's work.
Like they say, two's company...
ah you got lots of emotion in those few words....nice form as well ninot...smiles
I like the confused love that you see in the painting.
So much emotion in so few words. Excellent.
so much felt with so few words. Well done!
And ever always the wonder, the question, did I choose well, did I Do The Right Thing? And the pain of the suspicion that I did not.
Confused is the key word for me. But your poem tells a universal story. X
Goodbyes like this are never fun.
Amazing what we see and feel, yours speaks of sad good-byes, but it feels it's right to say good-bye and life to begin again! Nicely done!
...loves takes free flight... but still it's difficult to understand the differences from each... smiles... i like your cinquain Ninot...
emotion.....njicely written and thanks for sharing
There's a lot of feeling to shake out of these few words. Me like very much.
Lovely use of a not so easy form ....
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The anger seems present so often in PP's work.
ReplyDeleteLike they say, two's company...
ReplyDeleteah you got lots of emotion in those few words....nice form as well ninot...smiles
ReplyDeleteI like the confused love that you see in the painting.
ReplyDeleteSo much emotion in so few words. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteso much felt with so few words. Well done!
ReplyDeleteAnd ever always the wonder, the question, did I choose well, did I Do The Right Thing? And the pain of the suspicion that I did not.
ReplyDeleteConfused is the key word for me. But your poem tells a universal story. X
ReplyDeleteGoodbyes like this are never fun.
ReplyDeleteAmazing what we see and feel, yours speaks of sad good-byes, but it feels it's right to say good-bye and life to begin again! Nicely done!
ReplyDelete...loves takes free flight... but still it's difficult to understand the differences from each... smiles... i like your cinquain Ninot...
ReplyDeleteemotion.....njicely written and thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteThere's a lot of feeling to shake out of these few words. Me like very much.
ReplyDeleteLovely use of a not so easy form ....
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