Red


red river flows still
centuries of hate linger
kingdoms embrace fall

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In memory of Champa





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17 comments:

  1. Brian MillerFebruary 9, 2013 at 6:44 AM

    nice...you cover a lot of history in a few short words...much of it written in red...

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    1. ninotazizFebruary 9, 2013 at 6:54 AM

      Ancient Champa was full of red - red towers, red blood baths, red horizons as the sea beckons Champa maritime conquest.

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  2. anthonynorthFebruary 9, 2013 at 7:11 AM

    History never changes. Nice one.

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  3. Ramesh SoodFebruary 9, 2013 at 8:09 AM

    A nice haiku.. and truth too..

    RS:)

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  4. Amrit SinhaFebruary 9, 2013 at 10:33 AM

    I hope we don't have red rivers in future !!!

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    1. ninotazizFebruary 9, 2013 at 9:13 PM

      I hope so to, Green, but Man seems to be seeking conflicts every time.

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  5. Gemma WisemanFebruary 9, 2013 at 8:25 PM

    The red river of hate needs a drought of love to dry its energy! Graphic haiku!

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2013 at 2:22 PM

    Very nice red haiku.

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  7. Eliz FrankFebruary 13, 2013 at 12:32 PM

    You did a beautiful post on this one... love your haiku. ;-)
    Eliz

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    1. ninotazizFebruary 14, 2013 at 8:45 AM

      Thank you Eliz. I have a passion for ancient Asian legends and kingdoms.

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2013 at 10:45 PM

    Very powerful

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