Creation

 
 
Sanctimonious
Rebuke ended  creation
Aborted life -
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8 comments:

  1. dang, harsh reality
    raw & gritty
    nicely spun

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    1. Maybe...but sad. I do not like sad haiku but these words just forced themselves on me.

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    1. You, who care for so many, would feel the pain and sadness, I am sure.

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  4. Ninot Ma'am,
    Unwanted and sadly not afforded the joys of a beginning. Powerful take,sad but nicely done!

    Hank

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