Light


she lit up the room
ignited the space between them
her knowing smile. his passion. 

long before the flick of the lighter
the bursting blue white flame
reached the cigarette

between his lips

by ninotaziz

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16 comments:

  1. She really is the focal point in the photo...nice write!

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    1. As beautiful ladies usually are, Tess!

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  2. This "heats" up the room..it had to be, no escape... Very good...

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    1. Thank you Lyn, glad you feel the heat!

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  3. Yes, she did, and there was nothing he could do about it. Great write. Thank you.

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  4. Ok Missy ... you have made smoking seem irresistible!

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    1. Ha! Ha! Of course I know better now, Helen, but when I was younger, dear me - it was so irresistible !

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  5. You certainly ignited this space! :)

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    1. Jinsky, the picture did that. Naughty Tess must have thought we needed some lighting up...

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  6. Ninot Ma'am,
    A great build-up before all the festivities. It can go through the night, all night! Nicely!

    Hank

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    1. Thank you Sir Hank. Throughout the night indeed!

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  7. She does seem to have that way about her of lighting up the room! Lighter or no lighter!

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  8. I think we were a little bit on the same wavelength here, especially at the beginning.

    =)

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