poemsbyninotaziz: Footprints

Footprints

Summer fading fast

Looking back at my footprints
You are left behind

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12 comments:

BarbaraSeptember 26, 2012 at 4:43 PM
Very sad one! Sounds like the age old summer romance, ended when summer ends.
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EllaSeptember 26, 2012 at 5:00 PM
This is sad! :D
Well Done on you Haiku
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kaykualaSeptember 26, 2012 at 5:01 PM
Ninot Ma'am,
No,not to leave him! A cycle and a waiting game is fun! Just a respite to be savoured at later times - fading summer will certainly be back and with vigour! Brilliant haiku!

Hank
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The Write GirlSeptember 26, 2012 at 5:28 PM
This haiku takes on a romantic quality. I enjoyed every verse!
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Brian MillerSeptember 26, 2012 at 7:46 PM
oh sad....the leaving behind
maybe they will follow the foots steps...
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PattiKenSeptember 26, 2012 at 8:39 PM
Summer romance... maybe sad to leave it behind, or maybe it will follow.
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Judith WesterfieldSeptember 26, 2012 at 9:32 PM
You are left behind -- great last line, unexpected and powerful
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ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 27, 2012 at 5:36 AM
Summer romance in just a few words. Wonderful.
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Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 27, 2012 at 4:20 PM
I join in the general mourning...

Footprint
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Carrie Van HornOctober 4, 2012 at 2:33 PM
This is sad yet beautiful and I love it! Hope all is well for you these days Ninot! :-)
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Abu ZunnurOctober 16, 2012 at 7:40 AM
Hi Ninot!

Time flies, and we move on, walking fast, leaving the sweet memories behind.
Added you to my reading list in my blog :)
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