tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post7540948523030327968..comments2023-09-13T03:07:25.698-07:00Comments on poemsbyninotaziz: Flawedninotazizhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-89524668369522414142012-10-23T15:26:32.247-07:002012-10-23T15:26:32.247-07:00Strangely, I did not think of Avatar at all! But I...Strangely, I did not think of Avatar at all! But I concur!ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-2535212905879596982012-10-23T15:25:55.064-07:002012-10-23T15:25:55.064-07:00Dear Audrey,
It is my first too. I think 5SF is a ...Dear Audrey,<br />It is my first too. I think 5SF is a wonderful idea. It does train us to become economical and yet it was crucial just to find the right word.<br /><br />One key thing I think, is NOT having long winding sentences to compensate.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-24705732541031742922012-10-23T15:23:45.314-07:002012-10-23T15:23:45.314-07:00Sorry Mary! That's all for this story now.Sorry Mary! That's all for this story now.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-20685337532456378922012-10-23T15:22:48.449-07:002012-10-23T15:22:48.449-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-10916153498250248122012-10-23T14:36:22.961-07:002012-10-23T14:36:22.961-07:00I thought this was beautifully said---my first exp...I thought this was beautifully said---my first exposure to 5-sentence fiction!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-86301894467098186462012-10-23T14:14:04.865-07:002012-10-23T14:14:04.865-07:00Avatar does come to mind in this Ninot....perfect ...Avatar does come to mind in this Ninot....perfect for the prompt! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-78744557381762687812012-10-23T10:17:36.152-07:002012-10-23T10:17:36.152-07:00I too though of Avatar. It's a very interesti...I too though of Avatar. It's a very interesting beginning that makes me want to know more!Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-82185114543158336472012-10-22T23:43:46.053-07:002012-10-22T23:43:46.053-07:00Dear Lisa,
Had a lovely visit to your blog. Keep o...Dear Lisa,<br />Had a lovely visit to your blog. Keep on writing and never never give up what you love!ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-84327593009921317522012-10-22T23:05:10.771-07:002012-10-22T23:05:10.771-07:00Why, that is so true. Perfection is just perfectio...Why, that is so true. Perfection is just perfection. But beauty celebrates how little 'flaws' makes a unique picture.<br /><br />However, I wish we could heal our flawed world.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-42605533319907780552012-10-22T23:03:19.382-07:002012-10-22T23:03:19.382-07:00Thank you Sherry. Yes, it is rather Avaratistic, i...Thank you Sherry. Yes, it is rather Avaratistic, isn't it ? ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-27219696745417430482012-10-22T23:02:40.428-07:002012-10-22T23:02:40.428-07:00Thanks Sir Hank. As I am focusing on stories and n...Thanks Sir Hank. As I am focusing on stories and novels, I find this exercise in prose helpful indeed.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-25246974367173202732012-10-22T23:01:28.840-07:002012-10-22T23:01:28.840-07:00I will certainly try to come back weekly. It was s...I will certainly try to come back weekly. It was such fun!ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-68656665824403915782012-10-22T11:52:35.398-07:002012-10-22T11:52:35.398-07:00Beautifully put!Beautifully put!Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-65306371011704638872012-10-22T08:18:00.811-07:002012-10-22T08:18:00.811-07:00Lovely. We are all flawed - that's part of the...Lovely. We are all flawed - that's part of the beauty of life.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-59701335596153640482012-10-22T08:12:47.815-07:002012-10-22T08:12:47.815-07:00FANTASTIC! An Avatar. Beautifully done, Ninot!FANTASTIC! An Avatar. Beautifully done, Ninot!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-52345892508974732402012-10-22T05:39:59.004-07:002012-10-22T05:39:59.004-07:00Ninot Ma'am,
FSF seems interesting! Your verse...Ninot Ma'am,<br />FSF seems interesting! Your verse moves beautifully. Yes, there're lots of things wrong in this world! Great!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-47000487631388289352012-10-22T03:43:04.097-07:002012-10-22T03:43:04.097-07:00A well written snapshot of the way we must look to...A well written snapshot of the way we must look to an outsider: please continue with 5FS, it's a wonderful way to convey a lot in a small space :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com