tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post6001370140094245921..comments2023-09-13T03:07:25.698-07:00Comments on poemsbyninotaziz: Watchingninotazizhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-16886680936637745172010-09-04T17:16:42.144-07:002010-09-04T17:16:42.144-07:00brilliant tale!brilliant tale!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-45458374265023375922010-09-02T09:12:07.298-07:002010-09-02T09:12:07.298-07:00If only they knew she was watching...
Beautiful.If only they knew she was watching...<br />Beautiful.~T~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17969562036638831748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-42496832750504947302010-09-01T18:18:01.158-07:002010-09-01T18:18:01.158-07:00Mystical. Moving, poignant and just lovely. I like...Mystical. Moving, poignant and just lovely. I like the tenderness very much.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-70359664680337850182010-09-01T17:54:57.545-07:002010-09-01T17:54:57.545-07:00lovely ghost story. very touching.lovely ghost story. very touching.Jaimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09453433190266432905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-53712943261457042232010-09-01T08:57:38.748-07:002010-09-01T08:57:38.748-07:00I am so very late reading these wonderful Magpies ...I am so very late reading these wonderful Magpies ..... yours is stunning.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-8395035096952927702010-09-01T02:10:11.242-07:002010-09-01T02:10:11.242-07:00This was such a sad and beautiful poem... I almost...This was such a sad and beautiful poem... I almost cried on reading those last 2 lines... <br />It played CLEARLY so clearly in my head.. liked a movie!<br />Brilliant!<br /><br />From happy to sad to memories back to happy... and it goes on...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-83447410963311877442010-08-30T13:47:57.897-07:002010-08-30T13:47:57.897-07:00I loved the "electric thoughts"
LovelyI loved the "electric thoughts"<br /><br />Lovelycosmos camihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09558327124451076957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-39476425602805682362010-08-28T07:29:25.880-07:002010-08-28T07:29:25.880-07:00ah- that;s my mother! Lovely poem.ah- that;s my mother! Lovely poem.Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-15276733865026965872010-08-28T04:18:07.984-07:002010-08-28T04:18:07.984-07:00Dear Angela,
I spent some time looking at your lov...Dear Angela,<br />I spent some time looking at your lovely photos but somehow could not leave a message.<br /><br />Thanks for dropping by!ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-48163753116803529862010-08-28T04:16:16.718-07:002010-08-28T04:16:16.718-07:00Dear Brian,
Great to see you here, thanks for your...Dear Brian,<br />Great to see you here, thanks for your feedback. Cheers!ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-86520565534270524572010-08-28T04:01:14.406-07:002010-08-28T04:01:14.406-07:00Dear Lydia,
I am hopeful that you found some solac...Dear Lydia,<br />I am hopeful that you found some solace in this poem. And if you felt something deep inside, I am blessed.<br /><br />Thank you for dropping by and I am glad to have met you here...ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-18729788469573241002010-08-27T23:45:42.885-07:002010-08-27T23:45:42.885-07:00I was lost in this magpie and personally touched. ...I was lost in this magpie and personally touched. My mother died ten years ago and her former home is in the same town where I live. I recently took a walk to her neighborhood and walked slowly in front of her house. A favorite tree brought memories and I took one fleshy leaf from it, brought it home, and pressed it in wax paper between two books. As your poem notices, she noticed...Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-51951836282642445262010-08-27T21:50:44.422-07:002010-08-27T21:50:44.422-07:00Nice Magpie, very touching and melancholy.Nice Magpie, very touching and melancholy.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12489264697266150220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-72896473553132734352010-08-27T20:08:14.593-07:002010-08-27T20:08:14.593-07:00a rather chilling read...watching and waiting ther...a rather chilling read...watching and waiting there in the garden...shivers. nice magpie....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-67276934619202923172010-08-27T15:43:30.150-07:002010-08-27T15:43:30.150-07:00Ditto, Carmen. Especially your blue post recently....Ditto, Carmen. Especially your blue post recently. The eggs were a brilliant shade of blue!ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-34654267034585047032010-08-27T14:47:20.946-07:002010-08-27T14:47:20.946-07:00Very touching poetry. I always enjoy reading your...Very touching poetry. I always enjoy reading your posts.RNSANEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-47515421394044544442010-08-26T22:44:11.116-07:002010-08-26T22:44:11.116-07:00Dearest Carrie,
That's it! Yes - it was the po...Dearest Carrie,<br />That's it! Yes - it was the power of love that moved me. It was written initially in the first person. Then I felt - that wouldn't do at all...and changed it.<br /><br />Dear Willow,<br />Yes in a strange way, a measure of happiness returned.<br /><br />Dear Suz,<br />Thank you. That is one of my favourite lines...<br /><br />Thank you Arian. For me it was more the living and the house. Thank you for reminding me of the gentle ghost.<br /><br />Dear Friko ,<br />Willow gave aus a great prompt indeed!<br /><br />Yes TALON,<br />It is a little bit sad...will they forget her?<br /><br />Thank you Elizabeth. I Love your dragon! And the wonderful apple garden! <br /><br />Dear Weasel,<br />Thank you!<br /><br />Dear Sherry... <br />"...and kept his heart safe from breaking....." My favourite line too. Thank you for noticing that she sees to every need.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-30205448456093433662010-08-26T17:04:06.770-07:002010-08-26T17:04:06.770-07:00A bittersweet poem... Nicely written...A bittersweet poem... Nicely written...Diannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06778062706708568457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-12964554714473904052010-08-26T12:47:32.505-07:002010-08-26T12:47:32.505-07:00A touch of melancholy and a sense of strong and po...A touch of melancholy and a sense of strong and poignant love make this a beautiful read!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-32869595564235006732010-08-26T12:36:55.270-07:002010-08-26T12:36:55.270-07:00Beautiful and dark. Elements essential to life. ...Beautiful and dark. Elements essential to life. I agree with Sherry Blue Sky, I love all of the lines.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02827134249866205251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-53915983401257099212010-08-26T12:11:50.345-07:002010-08-26T12:11:50.345-07:00"...and kept his heart safe from breaking......."...and kept his heart safe from breaking....." A lovely tender poem, full of a mother's love, of life's pain, and also of the comfort and tenderness a wife and mother holds her family in, as she notes and sees to every need. Beautiful! I loved every line.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-32562158622174394122010-08-26T09:52:02.894-07:002010-08-26T09:52:02.894-07:00Excellently written! Very atmospheric magpie! =)
...Excellently written! Very atmospheric magpie! =)<br /><br />-WeaselWeaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-5002208646070987212010-08-26T08:40:14.024-07:002010-08-26T08:40:14.024-07:00I like the poem and the feelings it invokes, but f...I like the poem and the feelings it invokes, but find something a bit brooding at the end, not exactly sad, but deeper than that. Great job with the prompt,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-45625020780294601632010-08-26T08:24:17.609-07:002010-08-26T08:24:17.609-07:00What a beautiful magpie. I see her watching...I se...What a beautiful magpie. I see her watching...I see her waiting...and it makes me sad.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-79001673156365490952010-08-26T08:21:08.771-07:002010-08-26T08:21:08.771-07:00I am so sad,
How can a sweet little cottage provok...I am so sad,<br />How can a sweet little cottage provoke such sad thoughts.Frikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04277167831642088694noreply@blogger.com