tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post3617489343822338059..comments2023-09-13T03:07:25.698-07:00Comments on poemsbyninotaziz: On The Runninotazizhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-63914272438851177412010-09-01T03:38:14.655-07:002010-09-01T03:38:14.655-07:00I like the second one - but that's because we ...I like the second one - but that's because we both had murder on our minds this week! LOL<br /><br />Thanks for coming back and leaving me the link to your 55.Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-84599499699242592202010-08-31T17:21:40.090-07:002010-08-31T17:21:40.090-07:00Yes, I'd much rather hide the cash and forget ...Yes, I'd much rather hide the cash and forget the body, than hide dead body full of cash LOL -- but what a wonderful glimpse of a larger story in this one, I love it!Susan at Stony Riverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10385202649291774852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-14665739102012684932010-08-31T05:40:51.643-07:002010-08-31T05:40:51.643-07:00Maybe you need to hide cash AND a body (of the per...Maybe you need to hide cash AND a body (of the person you took the cash from)! Good one this week. Cheers.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-22405101479511378732010-08-30T17:28:16.056-07:002010-08-30T17:28:16.056-07:00Oh no! No way, Hope...this was pure fiction. Words...Oh no! No way, Hope...this was pure fiction. Words that come out of the Jabberwockies of my mind!ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-63228336432587679532010-08-30T15:12:54.075-07:002010-08-30T15:12:54.075-07:00They were both creative! Sure, the 1st one didn&#...They were both creative! Sure, the 1st one didn't make me wonder if anyone's making you angry. ;Phopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03306622656461205674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-27513921437328390702010-08-30T11:47:00.650-07:002010-08-30T11:47:00.650-07:00That's the beauty of West Virginia. Just pick...That's the beauty of West Virginia. Just pick a town, stash a body or two, jump back on the interstate and just keep moving...yeah, right. :-) Well done.SouthLakesMomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08822510653198676631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-40558899183611155342010-08-30T07:24:43.883-07:002010-08-30T07:24:43.883-07:00I liked the original better - and who the heck bur...I liked the original better - and who the heck buries cash anyway?Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-11660600539682840582010-08-30T06:44:53.080-07:002010-08-30T06:44:53.080-07:00Wow! Four letters changes it from robbery to homi...Wow! Four letters changes it from robbery to homicide. Very clever. I like both.Pathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04587300140099806425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-28714383815123901162010-08-30T00:41:21.440-07:002010-08-30T00:41:21.440-07:00Well I liked both :-)
Nice ones.Well I liked both :-)<br />Nice ones.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-5618709261054875632010-08-29T23:58:01.754-07:002010-08-29T23:58:01.754-07:00I liked both of them, but especially the second. I...I liked both of them, but especially the second. I'm a creepy kind of girl!<br /><br />Have a wonderful week xEllie Garratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03731071128348213067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-33013743907456895492010-08-29T23:29:39.553-07:002010-08-29T23:29:39.553-07:00I'd have gone with creepy. Though I like the i...I'd have gone with creepy. Though I like the idea of dumping it in Coolville. Good tale.MorningAJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04719744167307369768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-67293786402760288392010-08-29T20:18:07.665-07:002010-08-29T20:18:07.665-07:00I'm another gruesome soul, who says go for cre...I'm another gruesome soul, who says go for creepy! (I wouldn't mind finding some stashed cash either, though!) Well done, on both accounts.<br /><br />Have a great week!Michael G-Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07947421844294471304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-72491943975657836482010-08-29T19:09:36.655-07:002010-08-29T19:09:36.655-07:00They are both good but I like the second one. It i...They are both good but I like the second one. It is very creepy.<br /><br />Have a great week.<br /><br /><a href="http://krazyblonde-kb.blogspot.com/2010/08/microfiction-monday-boy-named-coolville.html" rel="nofollow">My MM is here</a>.KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-74901229517215517372010-08-29T19:08:50.828-07:002010-08-29T19:08:50.828-07:00Suz,
I can't believe I am afraid of my own wri...Suz,<br />I can't believe I am afraid of my own writing.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-80801910349622332502010-08-29T18:54:42.720-07:002010-08-29T18:54:42.720-07:00I actually liked the first one
go for the edge!
th...I actually liked the first one<br />go for the edge!<br />there is something creepy about that signSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-83538864618588202912010-08-29T18:41:17.901-07:002010-08-29T18:41:17.901-07:00Thanks Sylvia. The original was too creepy for me,...Thanks Sylvia. The original was too creepy for me, so I changed it.<br /><br />Loved your mini-King.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-81744331393165721852010-08-29T17:48:31.520-07:002010-08-29T17:48:31.520-07:00Got to be careful where you hide the cash! What a ...Got to be careful where you hide the cash! What a fun take on the pic of the day! Terrific! Hope you have a great week!<br /><br />SylviaSylvia Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05484577678585907669noreply@blogger.com