tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post2835078064608914537..comments2023-09-13T03:07:25.698-07:00Comments on poemsbyninotaziz: Season of Reflection ninotazizhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-89848464583502988992015-04-27T14:05:01.961-07:002015-04-27T14:05:01.961-07:00Ah.. yes.. the struggle of life is not ending..
it...Ah.. yes.. the struggle of life is not ending..<br />it always is beginning and never ending..<br />and that is light.. as struggle makes <br />for strong and sleep with peace..<br />wHere dark is light..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-9163177744967949312015-04-27T00:39:43.771-07:002015-04-27T00:39:43.771-07:00Beautiful write and so much truth there.
'seas...Beautiful write and so much truth there.<br />'seasons, past chapters<br />measured by flight of stairs, <br />increasingly painful'<br />(this resonates)<br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-9394880272449425052015-04-26T17:59:26.958-07:002015-04-26T17:59:26.958-07:00Ninot Ma'am,
The haibun is perfect! One gets g...Ninot Ma'am,<br />The haibun is perfect! One gets goaded into activity that place time in tight compartments more so in the 4 seasons. One is more carefree in other regions. Very aptly reflected on. Great!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-63055356428368242122015-04-26T06:24:27.601-07:002015-04-26T06:24:27.601-07:00I particularly liked your haibun, a genre I am qui...I particularly liked your haibun, a genre I am quite passionate aboutAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18445997176174265322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-15593552655446945642015-04-25T12:43:50.509-07:002015-04-25T12:43:50.509-07:00Seasons as chapters, yes. Very much the same, pas...Seasons as chapters, yes. Very much the same, passing with various shades and textures. And "labeled proper" is a brilliant thought and turn of phrase! Very nicely done. AmyAmy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00546103899091072370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-39537513254429384172015-04-25T11:25:44.196-07:002015-04-25T11:25:44.196-07:00Beautiful, Ninot...Beautiful, Ninot...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-44124544044876835522015-04-25T05:39:05.415-07:002015-04-25T05:39:05.415-07:00Thank you BW. And your words, prophetic?Thank you BW. And your words, prophetic?ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-1886121466954947602015-04-25T05:37:23.402-07:002015-04-25T05:37:23.402-07:00I am glad, Claudia. Because that was the hardest t...I am glad, Claudia. Because that was the hardest to do.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-91356595427700366192015-04-25T04:57:40.477-07:002015-04-25T04:57:40.477-07:00I have tried this form over the last four five yea...I have tried this form over the last four five years. And I enjoy it tremendously. But it requires work.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-67051613443988591532015-04-25T04:54:10.980-07:002015-04-25T04:54:10.980-07:00You know Mary, because of the poetry blogosphere, ...You know Mary, because of the poetry blogosphere, we push ourselves a little bit more. Don't you think?ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-51182435527921206292015-04-25T04:31:20.380-07:002015-04-25T04:31:20.380-07:00Kanzensakura, in its flight, time stops.Kanzensakura, in its flight, time stops.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-61410260163305201562015-04-25T04:30:08.678-07:002015-04-25T04:30:08.678-07:00Thank you, Anthony.Thank you, Anthony.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-59523530143716909802015-04-25T04:12:29.924-07:002015-04-25T04:12:29.924-07:00Good to see you Grace. Spring is usually ally for ...Good to see you Grace. Spring is usually ally for happy thoughts, autumn for reflection. But spring seems so fleeting nowdays. And all too soon autumn is here. ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-86325879407273908262015-04-25T04:10:04.057-07:002015-04-25T04:10:04.057-07:00Thanks Björn. The lie haibun was actually inspired...Thanks Björn. The lie haibun was actually inspired by a journalist who was imprisoned for about 1000 days in China. The first day he was freed he looked at himself in the mirror. <br /><br />So I asked myself, do we really need mirrors to believe in ourself?ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-44855857097694684432015-04-24T16:54:07.184-07:002015-04-24T16:54:07.184-07:00This is absolutely stunning.This is absolutely stunning.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-38869679646976461802015-04-24T11:30:43.388-07:002015-04-24T11:30:43.388-07:00they're all so emotion-loaded and beautiful - ...they're all so emotion-loaded and beautiful - the last one though - the last one made me breathe really deep... Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-69764864105415253652015-04-24T10:22:07.798-07:002015-04-24T10:22:07.798-07:00These all are brilliant. I really like this very ...These all are brilliant. I really like this very unique thought: Seasons....captured by flights of stairs - so very true! Always great to read your words.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-90028268378267404112015-04-24T09:08:22.764-07:002015-04-24T09:08:22.764-07:00The form drew me in - the repetition throughout is...The form drew me in - the repetition throughout is so cohesive and tight - really liked this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-2313384324234066802015-04-24T07:57:35.658-07:002015-04-24T07:57:35.658-07:00outstanding words.... a fine set.
the cost of kno...outstanding words.... a fine set.<br /><br />the cost of knowing<br />paid in laughter tears and joy<br />long winter awaits<br /><br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-21994972484249162022015-04-24T06:20:28.759-07:002015-04-24T06:20:28.759-07:00Time...measured in the flight of the butterfly.......Time...measured in the flight of the butterfly....how brief our time is, but how beautiful. Hayes Spencer is kanzensakura.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05470561916200090354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-12572835065210672022015-04-24T05:30:39.673-07:002015-04-24T05:30:39.673-07:00I admire the seasons of reflection in the haiku, h...I admire the seasons of reflection in the haiku, haibun & quotation ~ This line gives me pause:<br /><br />We face the reflection that shows us truth<br /><br />Hope you are well, smiles ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-84561841185958148862015-04-24T02:15:04.504-07:002015-04-24T02:15:04.504-07:00Wonderful. I had to read it over and over to captu...Wonderful. I had to read it over and over to capture its depth. The short prose in the haibun complemented the haiku so well. The lies in the mirror was especially intriguing.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com