tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post1394968501312932520..comments2023-09-13T03:07:25.698-07:00Comments on poemsbyninotaziz: Oceanninotazizhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-83459513165235883422013-08-18T23:10:00.210-07:002013-08-18T23:10:00.210-07:00very beautiful!very beautiful!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-58482992871965937092013-08-16T22:54:11.102-07:002013-08-16T22:54:11.102-07:00...Ninot, these are sheer perfection of Haibun... ......Ninot, these are sheer perfection of Haibun... i am still learning the form to write one but would love to write many sometime... loved this... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-78261666846168483012013-08-16T06:57:41.452-07:002013-08-16T06:57:41.452-07:00I love the sensuality.I love the sensuality.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-61155324003999211382013-08-15T17:01:33.772-07:002013-08-15T17:01:33.772-07:00I love the sea, and your haibun on the ocean here ...I love the sea, and your haibun on the ocean here wins the Internet for me today. I loved all the imagery of equating someone with the power of the ocean. It made me read your work thrice. I am now a fan and will visit regularly. :O)Anne Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00741540499289419526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-26150276843249258982013-08-15T12:31:31.478-07:002013-08-15T12:31:31.478-07:00I am less affected by the moon, more perhaps it is...I am less affected by the moon, more perhaps it is the sea. The sea draws me back I think as I was there in the beginning. Maybe it is a yearning to be drawn back to the womb? Would you know?<br />What does all this have to do with your poem? Well I would not have had such thoughts had I not read your poem. And re-read it . . . and again.<br />So it has an impact. You must have so intended.<br />Cheers!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12823532229269308280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-85542248193065668362013-08-15T09:12:38.701-07:002013-08-15T09:12:38.701-07:00I just wrote my first haibun - I like the way this...I just wrote my first haibun - I like the way this piece fits together with masterful words<br />The ocean is always a favorite of minemoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-78379200864873841692013-08-15T05:46:48.852-07:002013-08-15T05:46:48.852-07:00Love your haiku and how your weaved it into that b...Love your haiku and how your weaved it into that beautiful haibun making it complete...brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-64631958492580968792013-08-15T00:27:12.878-07:002013-08-15T00:27:12.878-07:00Haiku are my favourite form of poetry, so you know...Haiku are my favourite form of poetry, so you know I'm going to love this, ninot. I like how you've morphed the two forms into one piece. Lovely. :-) Paul Andrew Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12825754356049486097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-40410907736029833382013-08-14T19:54:03.921-07:002013-08-14T19:54:03.921-07:00Beautiful verses, both. Sorry to have missed your ...Beautiful verses, both. Sorry to have missed your site lately. Hope you are well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-31729744637148855312013-08-14T08:18:26.222-07:002013-08-14T08:18:26.222-07:00Beautiful haibun, I love it!
within the mist
she ...Beautiful haibun, I love it!<br /><br />within the mist<br />she appears as a myth<br />with a story to tell<br />Frank Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11512960953837979822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-4536898499812958772013-08-14T04:47:51.603-07:002013-08-14T04:47:51.603-07:00Beautiful haibun. How I yearn for the 'caress...Beautiful haibun. How I yearn for the 'caress of the ocean.'Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-76931460991712410542013-08-14T04:07:35.515-07:002013-08-14T04:07:35.515-07:00Beautiful haiku dear ~ I love the velvety surface...Beautiful haiku dear ~ I love the velvety surface of the changing tides and call of the wind ~ Do we listen to it as seasons passed or are we renewed with its caress, like a new lover ~ I am happy that my other person, Heaven - is part of your inspiration ~ Thank you ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-79512268319455948792013-08-13T22:20:07.760-07:002013-08-13T22:20:07.760-07:00Loved the duality point of view Brian. When I star...Loved the duality point of view Brian. When I started out with this poem, I did not see the co-relation between the ocean and love. Grace's write-up somehow brought that out in me.<br /><br />An interesting experiment - honing this poem.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-52224415598633267222013-08-13T21:34:51.536-07:002013-08-13T21:34:51.536-07:00An elegant haiku mirroring the classic one.An elegant haiku mirroring the classic one.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-79625816185614811362013-08-13T20:16:36.787-07:002013-08-13T20:16:36.787-07:00it is the duality of the waves...like love...it ca...it is the duality of the waves...like love...it can make us bouyant one moment and drown us the next...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-32812528440945596682013-08-13T20:15:56.686-07:002013-08-13T20:15:56.686-07:00there is an interesting duality in that...much lik...there is an interesting duality in that...much like love...it can leave us bouyant one moment and drown us the next...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-23440974572602347822013-08-13T02:49:00.631-07:002013-08-13T02:49:00.631-07:00Glad you did Sumit...Glad you did Sumit...ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-91215280081545960742013-08-13T02:47:48.447-07:002013-08-13T02:47:48.447-07:00Dear Nanka,
I tried to comment on your page but c...Dear Nanka,<br /><br />I tried to comment on your page but could not. I hope ypou received my message which was :<br /><br />'The picture and poetry take me back in time. William Shakespeare writing The Twelfth Night…for I imagine ships today must be like everything modern - sleek, silent, soulless.'ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-59774003612801317782013-08-13T02:33:06.625-07:002013-08-13T02:33:06.625-07:00My dear MLM,
Thank you for that.My dear MLM,<br />Thank you for that.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-21196554398687574122013-08-13T02:32:46.135-07:002013-08-13T02:32:46.135-07:00Thank you Kalpana.Thank you Kalpana.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-8902074469510353732013-08-13T02:32:30.541-07:002013-08-13T02:32:30.541-07:00Oh, don't we know that!Oh, don't we know that! ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-66463577538575625392013-08-13T02:32:12.041-07:002013-08-13T02:32:12.041-07:00Thank you Helen. Humbled I am.Thank you Helen. Humbled I am.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-57210583713812115862013-08-13T02:31:44.533-07:002013-08-13T02:31:44.533-07:00I fear its depth, yet love its horizon.
Does the ...I fear its depth, yet love its horizon.<br /><br />Does the horizon belong to the skies or the sea?ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-10108435727626936722013-08-12T00:38:06.496-07:002013-08-12T00:38:06.496-07:00Gorgeous =)Gorgeous =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554309518179807002.post-686244663831729702013-08-11T03:49:51.744-07:002013-08-11T03:49:51.744-07:00Brought to my mind the calm sea above and the dang...Brought to my mind the calm sea above and the dangerous unseen depths with changing currents!! Lovely!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.com